Tactical Tuesday: Advice for Self-Editing


Writing a series of novels does not give an author the right to leave the reader dangling mid-plot at the end of any of the books in that series.

Whether a compilation of three or ten books is planned, every book should be written to stand alone. An author should always be mindful that a reader may not pick up book one first. Instead, book three in a series might grab the reader’s attention and send him looking for the first two books.

In the last year, I read two books written in a popular genre, which because of the genre’s very nature, has many similar plots and character names. The first book ended without any plot resolution. Unresolved plots are not the way to this reader’s heart—and I believe many readers would agree.

Almost a year later, I pick up another book by the same author, and the frustration began from the very first page. Characters walked on stage without introduction, plots seemed to have already started before I got into the author’s story world, and I found myself lost and flipping pages to see if I’d missed anything. Still, I continued on because I’m a glutton for punishment. Halfway through the book, I connected the dots and realized that the book in my hand was the second book in the series that had aggravated me previously. The good news: I finally got resolution to the plot. The bad news: I really didn’t much care. The author had two chances to win me over, and she failed.

Authors do not want their readers to complain about their books. So, when writing a series, it is important to self-edit with an eye toward giving each book legs of its own. In other words, even when a plot will resurface in another book in a series, there has to be a definitive end to each plot in the book at hand. A plot that ends with the hero riding off into the sunset while the heroine looks on in tears provides a resolution—albeit unhappy—but there is a promise of another story. Failure to resolve a plot causes a reader to feel cheated of both time and money.

Happy editing.

Make-A-Story™ - Monday's Writing Prompt

Writing to spec – you’ve heard the term.  It means writing what the publisher wants.  Can you do it?  In our new feature - Make-A-Story™, we ask you to create a story with these elements.  The story can be set in any time frame, any length, must adhere to our guidelines and have our standard Christian world view.   

A prank phone call
A camp stove
A child lost in the woods

Tactical Tuesday: Advice for Self-Editing


When you look at this picture, what do you see? Do you see a picture of a beautiful, but shy, younger woman or do you see the old hag-like woman?

Sometimes the words in the sentences we write are similar to this illusion. The writer may mean something totally different, but the reader’s mind paints another picture. Same words; different mindset.

For example: The man’s eyes remained fixed on the table.

Clearly, the author did not mean to paint the picture of a man’s eyes laying on the table, but some readers will see that image clearly. Other readers will gloss right over it and realize that the man was staring at the table.

So, in order to avoid painting the wrong picture in a reader’s mind, the words should be chosen carefully. The man’s gaze remained fixed on the table shows a much clearer picture.

Most often, the wrong picture is painted in words when an author has a character's body part doing something alone. This error has been dubbed the use of "floating body parts." For example: His hand reached out and grabbed her.

Now, I once saw a terrifying movie about a man's hand that had been cut off and it sought revenged on its own, but most often this is not what an author intends. The better form of the sentence is to allow the person to do the action. The reader will know that he grabbed her with his hand: He reached out and grabbed her.

If an author keeps in mind that a body part can do nothing without the person it is attached to, these funny or sometimes horrifying word pictures can be eliminated from prose.

Do you have any examples you’d like to share? Feel free to do so. Doing so, will help other authors to realize that the picture they wish to paint with their words isn’t the picture the reader might see.
Happy editing.

Make-A-Story™ - Monday's Writing Prompt

Writing to spec – you’ve heard the term.  It means writing what the publisher wants.  Can you do it?  In our new feature - Make-A-Story™, we ask you to create a story with these elements.  The story can be set in any time frame, any length, must adhere to our guidelines and have our standard Christian world view.  

A cold, blustery day
A lost cell phone
Mistaken identity